tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post1712133966098373736..comments2008-10-28T19:02:51.613-07:00Comments on breannas2012: PLN4breannas2012http://www.blogger.com/profile/02387925008291859428noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-77013000865777546222008-10-28T19:02:00.000-07:002008-10-28T19:02:00.000-07:00Breanna, you topic was very interesting I enjoyed ...Breanna, you topic was very interesting I enjoyed listing to what you had to say. I would like to say that you spoke to the class like you had read over this many times before hand; you flowed well in what you were saying. If I were in that situation as the worker across the street I would have just kept an eye on the kids and if no one was around for a while or no one came out of the house I would go knock on the door.mitchell2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/01800594258448422269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-43727257876214671562008-10-24T13:00:00.000-07:002008-10-24T13:00:00.000-07:00Breanna that was a really good presentation. you r...Breanna that was a really good presentation. you remembered what it was about. the story was a little funny she was stupid. but nice job on it.joeyo2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/01421903565755581065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-26367494346998992312008-10-24T12:57:00.000-07:002008-10-24T12:57:00.000-07:00awesome presentation i like how you connected the ...awesome presentation i like how you connected the story to your life and world affairs nice job and interesting article!!!reagang2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/15763077832022921402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-2406673710448734192008-10-24T12:56:00.002-07:002008-10-24T12:56:00.002-07:00That article was so sad, but you did a good job pr...That article was so sad, but you did a good job presenting you information. You had good eye contact, and I like that you asked a question at the end of you presentation. Regarding your question about doing something, I think that what I would do, is check on the kids even if it did make me look a little dumb.Angel L 2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/05008214185295628887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-65768991838523487112008-10-24T12:56:00.001-07:002008-10-24T12:56:00.001-07:00Breanna way to go! I liked your analysis of the ar...Breanna way to go! I liked your analysis of the article although i don't know about the person who wrote it. Hypothermia is death from cold freezing temperatures not heat. Your presentation was amazing though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-34292683950072414002008-10-24T12:56:00.000-07:002008-10-24T12:56:00.000-07:00Breanna-I thought that your presentaion was very w...Breanna-<BR/>I thought that your presentaion was very well put together. I thought your blog was very interesting, and detailed. I liked how you explained the story in detail, because the way you explained it made me feel like I had read the story myself. The only suggestion I have it to not fidget with your hand so much, but other than that you did a really good job. I was very impressed!<BR/>Paigepaiges2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/17221773612186321362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-13542643029527328212008-10-24T12:55:00.002-07:002008-10-24T12:55:00.002-07:00Breanna-In this situation i would have done nothin...Breanna-<BR/>In this situation i would have done nothing because I wouldn't want to seem stupid and it would be none of my buisness. I think it's the mom's fault because she went to sleep, she didn't check on them at all.KalvinP2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/08593685363079369849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-64728669822347592342008-10-24T12:55:00.001-07:002008-10-24T12:55:00.001-07:00Brianna, I loved the story that you chose. It had ...Brianna,<BR/> I loved the story that you chose. It had a lot of meaning, most of the stories that people chose are irrelevant to everything. The only thing that I would have to say is that, you should just relax. Have fun with it, we all know you, and nobody cares if you screw up. It was a great presentation and I enjoyed all of the things you had to say. I also liked the connections to the veterans.<BR/> Mitchell BohMitchellB2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/02846149094752235649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-64238736379544863362008-10-24T12:55:00.000-07:002008-10-24T12:55:00.000-07:00Breanna- You had a really good presentation. You w...Breanna- You had a really good presentation. You were very clear and didn't fidgit. You had good connections but you might want to try to make a few more connectionsEmilyK2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/16430218621007063756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-14830935917243499032008-10-24T12:54:00.005-07:002008-10-24T12:54:00.005-07:00I thought it was great how you left us with a ques...I thought it was great how you left us with a question which really makes us think about you're writing and what we really think we should do in a situation like that. I agree with you on how you should go over and check on the kids, because they don't really know what they're doing is dangerous. You did a great job on the presentation because it didn't sound like you were reading from a notecard, it sounded like you really cared about it.OliviaB2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/14061870631615739353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-8048293379106196272008-10-24T12:54:00.004-07:002008-10-24T12:54:00.004-07:00Breanna, your preasontation was great. It was a ve...Breanna, your preasontation was great. It was a very sad story. I think I would try to see what was going on with those kids but it is always hard to know what you would do in a real life situation like that. You never know what might happen in real life. Good job.calebw2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04256092687141704198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-90548116167970630802008-10-24T12:54:00.003-07:002008-10-24T12:54:00.003-07:00I think the issue that you brought up is very shoc...I think the issue that you brought up is very shocking because any time that you hear about young children dying its very sad :(. I think that your presentation was very good and your connections to yourself and the world were very good. But i dont think that it is the mom's fault the kid died.NateL2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/11219328765793553559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-58941846785280935162008-10-24T12:54:00.002-07:002008-10-24T12:54:00.002-07:00Breanna- You did a good job on your presentation. ...Breanna- You did a good job on your presentation. I like how you ended the presentation with a question and left us thinking. You were connected to the audience and kept your focus. I get how you talk about that it should be everyone's responsibility to keep people safe. This is really sad but you did a good job about telling us about it. -ChaseChaseo2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/15238504114312594722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-78832735504531967472008-10-24T12:54:00.001-07:002008-10-24T12:54:00.001-07:00Good job talking and looking towards your crowd. G...Good job talking and looking towards your crowd. Good job connecting the story to yourself. I like how you connected the example to the war in Iraq and how we need to care a little more and help people. As a nation we also need to make smart decisions. Good job talking and connecting to the audience.AaronS2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/07832285594857935427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-3951796191875008812008-10-24T12:54:00.000-07:002008-10-24T12:54:00.000-07:00I like how you put a lot of connections from your ...I like how you put a lot of connections from your article. Also I like the question you said at the end it made us more involved with your presentation. Good job on speaking loud and staring at us while speaking to us. Your PLN was interesting.Good job!ruthl2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/00815555482271601193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-86540795349541530692008-10-24T12:53:00.005-07:002008-10-24T12:53:00.005-07:00Breanna-That is such a sad story. I think that it ...Breanna-That is such a sad story. I think that it is true that a lot of times we just watch and we dont do anything about it. I think that we need to start doing stuff instead of just watching from the side. You did a really good job explaining the story. I would just try to speak clearer. That was a really good job.briannab2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/02922978462026958145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-48590335718938686282008-10-24T12:53:00.004-07:002008-10-24T12:53:00.004-07:00Breanna- Good job on your PLN. It was definitely a...Breanna- Good job on your PLN. It was definitely an interesting topic, I’m glad that she’s getting tried for child abuse, because it sounds like she would be dangerous to other people too. She would probably be better off in jail. Good projection to the audience.NickK2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/11385371320635236217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-78305432161382570472008-10-24T12:53:00.003-07:002008-10-24T12:53:00.003-07:00Breanna- Good Job. You made strong connections. Yo...Breanna- Good Job. You made strong connections. You made a good choice for you story. You made good eye contact.anthonyf2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/11833087674125478204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-70878061983674035632008-10-24T12:53:00.002-07:002008-10-24T12:53:00.002-07:00Breanna- I really like the message you portrayed. ...Breanna- I really like the message you portrayed. that was a depressing story. If I were in that possition I woukd totally do something about it. Good work.jakeL2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/03277626616796508725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-18527740304046950722008-10-24T12:53:00.001-07:002008-10-24T12:53:00.001-07:00breanna- Your doing really good. I think that the ...breanna- Your doing really good. I think that the only thing is your saying 'like' a little to much. I think that how you connected it to our government and how it's working is good. I really agree with you. it's a sad story and i thought it was creative to end it with a speech. I also like how you made it a speech more then a paragraph.Lena R 2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/07042746147893740267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-90836136721125179872008-10-24T12:53:00.000-07:002008-10-24T12:53:00.000-07:00I really like how you said that if we see somethin...I really like how you said that if we see something wrong we need to do something about it. You had a good presentation voice and stance and it seemed like you were really talking to us. The only thing is that you said the word "like" many times. I think that you did a really good job.MollyBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09457668036067416732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-43855701436284732412008-10-24T12:51:00.001-07:002008-10-24T12:51:00.001-07:00Breanna- You did a great job of making eye contact...Breanna- You did a great job of making eye contact with the audience. You did a good job of saying how the story was connected to other things.FinlayBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11962328941275166448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-49481513327416679322008-10-24T12:51:00.000-07:002008-10-24T12:51:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Lena R 2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/07042746147893740267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-1213410253416097792008-10-24T12:50:00.003-07:002008-10-24T12:50:00.003-07:00Breanna- That story is so sad, its a very conufusi...<I>Breanna- That story is so sad, its a very conufusing story but you described it well. I believe the man should of done something seeing the kids in a window shut car. You connected the story to your own life and the government in a very good way. I would of helped the kids too, I completely agree that the man should of said something because there should always be an adult around kids when they are playing.</I>colleenO2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/00980202984368941961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226389997814378912.post-15369830690457481632008-10-24T12:50:00.002-07:002008-10-24T12:50:00.002-07:00that was very good and educational and you explain...that was very good and educational and you explained it great. i think you need to slow done and not say i think or i like alot. but everything else was exceptional.ElizabethE2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/09571283437236307731noreply@blogger.com